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[Abobo Truth Of Stache]

Lacked a little polish

Try to make the free-moving arm not being connected less noticeable.

Funny and otherwise greatly animated. Good job.

RicePirate responds:

I have a long ways to go. I know. This is kinda new for me.

[Super Peoples Pt.1]

Not terribly impressed...

Your characters look pretty good but some of the animations they don't. Movement is sometimes fiddly, and the actions they do could sometimes do without a frame. As the "darting of the eyes" part.

The voice acting I really didn't like at all... Now, I may just be a hardass, but you need more "emphasis" and "tone" to your voice. Sometimes the voices didn't fit in with the way there were acting, or the situation they were in.

Story wise... eh. I would have had given a background on WHY the dude was making this "magical rainbow solution" (which was gray when it exploded?) and why his pals were there with him.

Comedy was hit and miss here... The only thing that made me chuckle was the "radioactive lake" idea... Since the tone of the dude's voice (going back to the voice acting) indicated that he was being serious... I would ask some of your friends (who you know won't bullshit to you) to see if the material IS funny. Maybe even random people you don't know too well... You don't want pity chuckles, you want the real deal.

Work on your voice acting, smoother animations, and comedy and you got yourself some gold.

glasscake responds:

"smoother animations"
...really?

[Arrgh Idol]

Great Job

For what you had to work with (the audio submission and all) you did this amazingly. The voice does remind me of robin williams... it seems that some people didn't see the "talk like a pirate" competition and are voting on you for it being short...

one complaint... there should be blood and a bullet which goes through the guy. minus one point, but still 5/5

Wonchop responds:

Indeed. I need to think of a way to explain it to them without the phrase 'I'll punch anyone who keeps saying that'

[T E T R I S ' D]

Great idea.

I liked the idea, it was original, interesting, and, as far as I know, no one has done it before. Though all of these "ups" I have one or two downs. For one... it didn't make much sense to me why the stick figure had his head down the whole time... if blocks are dropping on him and he's looking down, then really he can't see what the fuck is going on... also, the animation (at times) was a tad bit choppy. Despite this, you still get 8/10, and 4/5.

KobraEditing responds:

Thanks

[DeRoze Christmas 2008]

lol

funnay funnay funnay. Lol. Made me laugh, and yeah i found the easter egg

Pelemus-McSoy responds:

Then my work here is done. =3

~Pelo

[Stickman Game]

Hmm

This doesn't seem to flatter me as much as your other animations... The pencils were kinda slow and were too simple... The idea was funny, just not, in my opinion, put that great together. Still was decent and I still think that both of you are exceptional flash artists'.

Graeme responds:

Compared to other things I have done, I suppose this isn't as top notch.
But it was for fun, and we weren't REALLY fishing for awards or anything. It was just a relaxed exericse to learn to work well with others.

Yes. I'd say that about sums it up.

[Clock Crew Shorts]

I'm confuzed

It was good and all, but on your page I thought that you were making an RPG... Still funny though

Pelemus-McSoy responds:

I am. But this was a side project to keep me from going insane.

[Goat Trip]

Sad

Great movie, but only 409 people viewed it... :( I'm sorry for you.

Graeme responds:

Thanks man!
I was a little dissapointed more people didn't get to see it.
But as long as you and others got to, then it still makes me happy :D

[Random Pivots]

I'm confused....

Is there more then 1 pivot creator? Cause I don't think teh one I'm using would let me do all that...

Still some of those are good

LyricalEyes responds:

There's Pivot 2, and Pivot Three Beta. I use pivot two because there are less bugs, but I didn't add anything to it, it's all made in raw pivot, I don't know what you couldn't do.