That was absolutely superb. The animation was top notch, the drawing style and animation style was incredible, and the story was interesting the entire time. The world you portrayed is one that I wouldn't mind going into head first.
This was extremely well done--I fully hope that you surpass your expected kickstarter goal.
Lacked a little polish
Try to make the free-moving arm not being connected less noticeable.
Funny and otherwise greatly animated. Good job.
I have a long ways to go. I know. This is kinda new for me.
Luigi's my favorite game character...
Great animation, voice acting, and I didn't see that coming... Nice.
Not terribly impressed...
Your characters look pretty good but some of the animations they don't. Movement is sometimes fiddly, and the actions they do could sometimes do without a frame. As the "darting of the eyes" part.
The voice acting I really didn't like at all... Now, I may just be a hardass, but you need more "emphasis" and "tone" to your voice. Sometimes the voices didn't fit in with the way there were acting, or the situation they were in.
Story wise... eh. I would have had given a background on WHY the dude was making this "magical rainbow solution" (which was gray when it exploded?) and why his pals were there with him.
Comedy was hit and miss here... The only thing that made me chuckle was the "radioactive lake" idea... Since the tone of the dude's voice (going back to the voice acting) indicated that he was being serious... I would ask some of your friends (who you know won't bullshit to you) to see if the material IS funny. Maybe even random people you don't know too well... You don't want pity chuckles, you want the real deal.
Work on your voice acting, smoother animations, and comedy and you got yourself some gold.
That's pretty sick...
I expect wonders.
Laughed sooo much
My fucking favorite of yours man... Keep it up. MAKE THIS A SERIES...?
Let me start this off saying that I'm not someone who hates your animations but someone who's actually a fan of them... I await your new episodes every time they're in the portal...
So then why the seven?
-The same awesome sprite animation I've come to expect from you.
-A great new chapter story
-Fight scenes still look great
-Luigi and mario are still funny
-You incorporate things from both games quite well
-You fit the original characters from dragon ball z
-For the most part the sound is great
-The new 3d ship looks like crap and doesn't seem to fit well into the background
-The new "high-quality" models aren't my kind of thing
-Some of the sounds I didn't like...
-This one was considerably shorter then the previous one
-Nothing new introduced in fight scenes
-I had to wait a year
It seems like the risks you took weren't the right ones... The ship I didn't like and the high-quality models weren't to my liking either... I still voted a 4 because it was worth the watch and, I suppose, worth the wait. I'd like to see you take the fighting scenes to a different level instead of the same ol' thing that you seem to repeat with every movie.
I'm probably going to get a "useless" review, but hell, I'm aloud to speak my mind...
For what you had to work with (the audio submission and all) you did this amazingly. The voice does remind me of robin williams... it seems that some people didn't see the "talk like a pirate" competition and are voting on you for it being short...
one complaint... there should be blood and a bullet which goes through the guy. minus one point, but still 5/5
Indeed. I need to think of a way to explain it to them without the phrase 'I'll punch anyone who keeps saying that'
"And this one's for the drummer". Another great animation by Weebl....
you need to do two things... one. actually sync the notes instead of replaying the same loop over and over again... two a pre-loader... so, um yeah, work on that.
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