Score: 7

"Just..."

submission: (JPK)Defiance

date: June 10, 2008

Well for one, the bass drum is repetative, and I think that the triplets should be shorter. Ex.

What you are doing now: B B B
What I suggest ("-" stands for short pause) : B-B-B

I don't know if you can make it fast enough to sound right or slow enough for me to "approve"

But I guess the guitar and everything else was... I'd maybe make the guitar overpower the bass drum though.

Score: 9

"Really good actually"

submission: (JPK) Conquest

date: June 5, 2008

I actually enjoyed this one... Lol and for that responce, I was bored... really bored. Wow and it looped without me noticing.... good job 5/5

Score: 8

"Different, I'll give you that"

submission: Egyptian Mixdown

date: May 25, 2008

But that's not going to stop me from being honest. Some of the breaks weren't very good, the instrument changes were unexpected, and the start does not relate to the end.. Just an opinion, but I like loops have the start reflect the end vise versa. Maybe you should just do that without the bass... I dunno if you're making these ones or using loops though.

Off to D.C. in 7 hours :D

Score: 10

"= )"

submission: Beautiful Karma

date: May 13, 2008

Karma is so beautiful...

Score: 7

"Goth... lmao"

submission: Medieval

date: May 13, 2008

Pretty laid back... lol... I dunno this is just kinda odd... I would work on maybe adding something...

Score: 9

"Hah"

submission: Supression

date: May 11, 2008

That's nice... I like it

Score: 5

"My problem is..."

submission: Shadow Day (Remix Re-do)

date: May 11, 2008

That the two songs are similar sounding, if not the same... I dunno... I'd work on your transistions, the bass, and some of the background sounds. I like it though...

Score: 5

"Well"

submission: Shadow Day (All New Remix)

date: May 11, 2008

I guess you got your program and everything back, that's good news. The bad news is that it jumps around to much, some of the transistions don't work. If I were you I would re-check the transitions, and other stuff first... Good job though

Score: 8

"Yeah, it's good..."

submission: (JPK) Raw

date: April 25, 2008

But really it's almost the same exact thing... Sometimes the drums are a little odd too...

Score: 7

"okay"

submission: Warzone Theme

date: April 23, 2008

Not really a great loop... but if you made it longer and put an ending to it, it would probably be better. (3/5)